How many mistakes can you find in the following

1.Aids,Sars ,  dybeets  ,and obcit modern deceases Physitions
think is
due to unhealth life style many people doesn't excise workaplace, they was spenta too many time play Internet in home which not health


Aids, Sars, diabetes and obesity are modern diseases that physicians think are due to unhealthy lifestyle.  Many people don't exercise in the workplace. They spend too much time playing on the internet at home, which is not healthy.

2.She said her father that he was too hard her. He would not listen her and continued to prevent going out her freinds. So she left away from her home.

She said to her father that he was too hard on her. He would not listen to her and continued to prevent her from going out with her friends. So she left her home.

3.If only I knew the law, I not will leave my baby in the car yesterday afternoon. I only going to buy some milk from Macs. But the police was come and they had arrestes me. So I 'm not coming to Linc class tomorrow morning.

If only I knew the law, I wouldn't have left my baby in the car yesterday afternoon. I was only going to buy some milk from Maca.