Friday, 28 February 2014

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1.Sayes teh Boook ofo Plowerbus, " An gentel anser truns avay truns angry,bat anger vords mack people moore angrier.' Sew bee careful hwat yew sigh ata hopmme.
Says the book of proverbs,"a gentle answer turns away anger,but anger words make people angrier." So be careful what you say at home.

2.SVA (Subject-verb Agreement)
Koshy visits his grandma and give her a flower every week. She love him very much,and sometimes buth of them goes out for dinner together.

Koshy visits his grandma and gives her a flower every week. She loves him very much, and sometimes both of them go out for dinner together.

3PREP (Preposition)
She said her father that he was too hard her. He would not listen her and continued to prevent her going out her friends. So she left away from her home.

She said her father that he was too hard on her. He would not liaten to her and continued to prevent her from going out with her friends. So she left home.

4.CS9Comma Splice)
The War of 1812 changed the relationship between Canada and American, from that time on each country went its own way, I think it was a good thing.

The War of 1812 changed the relationsgip between Canada and American. From that time on each country went its own way. I think it was a good thing.

5.TENSE
In 1867,The British North American Act was pass.
Without that event,we will not be a nation today.
By 2017,Canada will be a notion for 150 years.

In 1867, The British American Act was passed.
Without that event, we would not be a notion today.
By 2017, Canada will have been a notion for 150 years.

1 comment:

  1. 1, Book of Proverbs is a name of book. Every letter of the beginning of the word has to be written with a capital.
    2. anger is noun, angry is adjective. so use angry followed by words.

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